Alright Fort a Start
Hey, I love the storylin even tho I don't dig these kind of genre too much. Anyway, you could add more feeling to the character, especially during the guy are feeling lonely, but since this is ur first, I gonna be soft on ya. LOL
Anyway, please add in more SFX, and maybe a voice-over audio to strengthen your movie.
Good job!
Great!
It had good animation for frame by frame animating, had a great story and plot, but it did lack some sound effects such as footsteps. Nevertheless, this movie was great for your first flash movie. Heck, who am I kidding, THIS MOVIE WAS AWESOME!!
cool
i like the fact that its all black and white and at the end colour comes to the world... this is awsome for a first submition, keep it up!