I'll review it like a flash submission
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Terrible all around. Stuff that you didn't make and you just copied from somewhere else, which is fine because I tend to do sprite stuff every now and then and this really isn't any different.
Please for the love of god put some kind of background into the submission. No detail no anything. Would have been much better if they were in some sort of space station or something similar like that.
Animation was so shaky and wasn't smooth at all. Hmm, looks like you really didn't try to make it that great and that you rushed. Not saying that you did, but that's just how it looks.
~ Story/Content ~
None whatsoever. Why though? Just because it's in pivot doesn't mean you can't do something with some sort of story behind it. Nobody wants to see a stick fight that lasts less then a minute with hardly any action whatsoever and on top of that no reasoning behind anything. Some people can make good ones like that, but you didn't do a great job of it.
Perhaps making it longer, etc..
I recommend getting flash and doing stuff in there with it. Even with my videos I do stuff in flash with it. That would make my live action videos more flash then your little stick guys. Ironic no?
~ Audio ~
A submission like this not only needs a story, but also needs voices for the characters. This could also include animations for the mouth movement, but I don't know if your ready for work like that yet so keep practicing.
Music was alright, but I would also like to see you do something with sound effects. Lasers, swooshes, etc.. You know.. the small details that make submissions good.
~ Overall ~
I'll review it like a flash submission