I like it...
refreshing err... original idea/concept
Good point challenging the clinches of newgrounds
Hope to see more from you
I like it...
refreshing err... original idea/concept
Good point challenging the clinches of newgrounds
Hope to see more from you
good......
really good except i dint really get the ending... sorry!
its cool im just glad you liked it
the message was good...
but the delivery could have been cleaned up a bit around the middle you started mixing up your words and stumbling the end joke was pretty good though better luck next time...
yeah i know i think it was the way i wrote it but the voice actor was great
Nice twist on the oh so popular cock joke
The monologue was fun to sit through.
The last bit of humor with the three other guys was very stale.
It was only a few seconds but it was of course, the punch line of the joke.
I feel this is still a nicely done flash with great ideas that indicate you have a future.
I thought
I would be more suprised by a submission that is front paged but meh, didnt touch me that much, only it had a certain flow but i found things funnier then those, it was not bad too! Good luck and don't quit because of my comment, i'm just saying this as a little short that need better development!
Also, voices werent that good, just so you know!