Lol?
This was an interesting way of making a Kingdom Hearts Flash. It wasn't bad, it was actually funny. It just isn't especially good artwork. Next time, add some more color and detail.
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neoalien12 responds:
Yeah, I'm trying to invest in a tablet but as of right now all me and my friend have our crappy little trackpads that aren't very responsive and are a bitch to work with.
Heh..
I didnt really follow it but the sound was really clean it was kinda funny tho. You have potential, next time lets see better animation and maybe some voice acting.
neoalien12 responds:
Thanks a bunch! I was totally about to do some voice work but the internal mic on my computer broke by itself somehow and doesn't pick up sound anymore. No wonder nobody on TeamSpeak heard me last month....
A good concept
And it could've possibly been even more funny! The main problem was that the art took away from the overall flash. You couldn't really tell who was who. Next time try to make the characters look more like who they are supposed to be and try using a little fbf instead of just tweens. Then you'll have a much better flash on your hands.
neoalien12 responds:
Thanks for a positive response with something that can actually help me improve instead of just saying "OMG UR FLASH SUCKS YOU SUCK GO DIE!". Thanks. I'll keep that in mind and the tweens were only to save time really, lol.. But I guess if you want something to look really nice you'll have to take your time more anyways.
Sorry man...
pretty bad, I don't know if this was your first flash or whatever. But this was just lacking structure, a story, writing, artistic abilities. AND, not to mention it was reeking of tweens. I really hope your next flash is less of a disappointment than this.
neoalien12 responds:
Well.. This was my 1st Flash that I actually didn't try that hard on. I have a few other that we were for days and almost weeks on, but that was years ago and they didn't get accepted to the Portal then so they must've been pretty horrendous.
....................fags
u freakin fags r idiots this was awesome for 4 freakin hours i gave it a 5 and will again tomorrow
neoalien12 responds:
Why thank you kind sire.