its ok
its aight i like it but ya oly 8 stars
its ok
its aight i like it but ya oly 8 stars
not bad..........but............
you can do better in the visuals, still it was really funny
Pretty cute
Seeing as how it was that short, I was not expecting much of a punchline. I am however glad to say that the one you had was pretty funny and got a chuckle out of me. I think a better idea would be to take the different shorts and put them in the same movie. You are expecting something violent or something in a Newgrounds flash. It was cute how it turned out to be a little innocent thing like that. You are starting to remind me of Tomorrow's Nobody and how they released some shorts after long episodes.
It was ok
maybe try developing the characters a bit first.
you cant be seriuose
that was one of the worst flashes iv ever seen.