Nice but probs not a good subject
I don't think many people like runescape or this would offend them so if you choose a better subject you might of got more views and good comments anyways awsume flash :D
Reviews for "RunescapeWorstScenerios"
Weeeell
As it's been said for a first flash I think it is well done. Of course that doesn't automatically make it "OMG AMAZING" but compared to the stupid things people usually make without putting effort into anything you are doing well.
Now then, there is nothing wrong with having no sound, I know how hard it is to get it myself.
I would advise practicing on frame by frame animation, it takes alot more work but of course it comes out better.
And you are relying a little too heavily and internet "funny" slang phrases like "ZOMG PL0X" and all that. It can be amusing when used cleverly but you are on the verge of excess/annoying.
It was still a bit amusing, as someone who once played runescape. So I'd say you have a general idea of what you are doing and are already at a certain level of qualiy on your very first flash. Keep at it.
TimGoesToTheGym responds:
Thanks for a great review, ill keep your tips in mind!
Well done
Great drawings! Its odd without sound but its still good.
Average...
This is good for your first flash. You desperately need sound though.
Righteo...
Ok, for a first animation that's not too bad... but you're not getting any points for that.
The visuals were ok, the way you drew them though made it hard to animate, hence you had to use a lot of tweens. For more fluent animation and better looking visuals try a more frame by frame based enviorment, especially for walking and character movement.
Now, sound in this would of been better, you mentioned you couldn't get sound to work, it's quite simple actually:
File > Import to Stage
(Chose the sound file you wish to import).
Then click on the frame in which you want this sound to start, down the bottom of the screen should be your 'Properties' toolbar. Select the sound dropdown bar (should be set to 'none' at the moment) and select your sound.
I think if you spend a little more time you should make something good, but for now... this is an alright first attempt.
Keep it up!