nice
make a longer one and your sorted, i like the way he just appers out of nowhere not many of the stickman movies i have seen do that
Reviews for "Stickman Short"
ProdigalFlashMaster responds:
thanks 4 the review ;) , im making a stickman animation thatle be longer, this is submitted first because i finished it first ..because its short.. lol
well
Very good for a first submission, the starting was a bit too long and i think u should use the onion skin feature in flash to create a more dynamic animation for ur stick figures if its a frame by frame animation Anyway good but i look forward to see better from u
ProdigalFlashMaster responds:
Thanks for the onion-skin info! :D
roflmao
Omg,
Its just gotta be longer then its a ten!!! So funny.
you could do alot with that!
ProdigalFlashMaster responds:
Thank you very much, i thought about making it longer but decided i need to finish it before i get bored with it. lol
Can use some work...
In all I did think that it was a fine flash, I loved how you built the character in the beginning there's just a few things that might help you get better scores on your future movies.
The slow motion replay, in my opinion should be kept on television, not on flash.
Put a little bit more effort into your gun, I want to know its a rocket launcher, not be told its a rocket launcher.
When you fire a gun (espically a rocket) your body doesn't lock up, try to add a kickback motion into someone when they fire.
Other than that good job, I look forward to seeing if you take my advice.
6/10, 4/5
ProdigalFlashMaster responds:
thanks for the advice, yeh i deffenitly should have put more effort into my gun, also i thought of how the guy holding the gun could slightly fly backward into the other guy then forward into ... oh whatever, :) im working on another stickman animation, im using onion skining on that... but i didnt think i would get into stickmen, its the whole fbf i dont like, i wouldnt mind a fbf for art, thatd be fun... oh.. il do that lol. Thanks For The Advice. cyu
EDIT: well, on this animation, his body doooes lock up, its a darn cartoon m8, the slow motion replay was funny and i think quite imaginative, otherwise it would be boring, the art of the rocket was bad, i admit.
-C- Rank
Could have been better in a way. Maybe u should've extended it a lil. More this more that.