Too...boring.
Well I would have gave this a 10 but I personally don't like the song much so it got annoying and overan it's visit. Try to put in a better storieline man I'm not sure if it was just me but I didn't really get it, the strawberry clock wanted the alarm clock then killed it what? Overal you have talent but this wasn't in my taste, or in the right ballfield for me. Sorry if you take this the wrong way and think that I'm an ass but atleast I just don't say ( IT SUCKED MAN I HATE THIS) all in caps like a fucktard would ;P. Oh well I'm dragging on this comment far more than it needed to be I better just end it now before I type anything else xD.