hmm...
Not bad. Your english needs some work, and your animations are a bit choppy, but overall, not bad.
Reviews for "the legend of mario pt.1A"
Not a bad first flash
Had some susspense and ran a little smooth. Work on the animating a bit and it could be a good flash!
KOOL
well it was still good. not bad for a trial
um....
exuse me, but mario looks like he has been cut out from something.... i can see wight lines around him, but good flash. can you make the yellow, i think credits dissapear?
-D- Rank
The thing in the middle could have dissapeared, The spriting is not really that good, Lack of clean movements, and maybe compress the Sound Data. It seems that ure not adept with English writting, which could mean that ure not an anglophone, or ure anglophone that has a major problem with english, then u should maybe let someone correct ure script before publishing it. Don't give up and Stand Straight.
GreenMexican responds:
better i use macromedia ok?