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Reviews for "The Legend of Korah Ch 1"

Did he ever get that drink?

:( ...poor guy. I enjoyed it except for the annoying and high pitched sword sounds, the bad up close characters. Also snow is a pretty lame guy. "I've trained this long for the sword, but you beat me in a duel. So instead of letting you have the sword to kill yourself with it, I'm going to join you on your quest." Whaaa? If I was snow and I gave a damn about the sword, I would backstab him the first chance I got, take the swords, and be done with it.

In other words, he's a very flat character. It's okay for a kid like Korah to be flat and naive character because he's a boy and he's the main character which allows the story to be explained when he learns about it, but not Snow. Snow needs to get in touch with reality, his struggle, his morals, his character, and his surroundings pretty damn quick or this series will die. Make his past apparent in his day to day life (without drawn out flashbacks and memories that drown the drive of a plot).

Err,hmm...

Seems okay,I just think the way he holds the sword is a little strange,and to much teleporting.I understand that you are new to sprites and all,but I think most people wouldn't want a DBZ style series.But I am interested in this series.I'm sure you will do better.

Nothing special.

You're fighting is bland and needs work. Not only that but the DBZ style was corny at best. You need to approve how the story line is moving and try to rework your sprites so they actually fit into battle. You're "Evil King" sprites should probably be custom as well.

My interest in the series was somewhat.. Gone when I watched this movie. The animation is good, witch is the only real reason you are getting five stars. Sorry to break it to you but you need to to alot better and make the fight scenes have a real sense of action instead of repeated frames. Good luck with another episode, work on your scripts as well so you can have more fluent story line.

MEH....

it was ok but sometimes it was jsut too zoomed in..

the sound efx got really really annoying and i didn't really feel like reading so i just skipped it so i cant say about the storyline... the combat was lame, just the same sprites doing the same thing over and over again...

but it was ok...
:D
good job though.

Nice job.

I only had one problem with it.
This might just be, but they had a fight, then about 10 seconds later, your trust worthy, then they trust each other?

Honestly, i would of changed the story line a little so they are still curious about each other it seemed a bit.. iffy?
Ya no?