Nice
I watched both 16 and 12. 16 was great, its just i had only one problem. The last song sounded a little buggy with some static. All around good flash. For 12, it was good too, couldn't find anything wrong with it.
Reviews for "Sonic Syythe World 16"
Okay, I need to give you advice.
First, I like the way you animate, like fight scenes and such, but sometimes, flashy effects aren't what you need. One example of this is in the C Symbol text, when they disapear or appear, it's in a silly little way, just a simple little effect is al you need. Also, please check your english before you finalize what the text box will be, I can understand what you are saying, but it's in an awkward way. Like when the Z Symbol had said "Hahaha! I am going to fight you now!" or something like that. It sounds more interesting with text like: "Bwahaha! I hope you are a challenge, because I've been hoping for a fight all day!" or something close to that.
Another HUGE thing you need to look out for in your movies, and SSW especially. SLOW DOWN AND DON'T JUST ADD RANDOM THINGS. Really, this is a big one. I can tell by the way you are killing off characters, that you want the series to end soon, but you can't just kill off every charcter, and adding little things like the astral sign symbols will only increase the length of the series, because you'll end up having to explain them later.
This was by no means bad, just a little too much going on, one on top of another, too fast.
Still too quick on the plot of the whole movie.
I still enjoy watching the SSW series, but there is one problem that happens in this series ever since a few episodes ago. This problem is not the extreme amount of death in this movie, it's the fact that much of the plot is way to rushed and not explained well enough, or there are areas not explained at all. Let me list a few of these
1. In episode 15, the last time you see Gingko, Sparky, and Zerofuse they were talking about some sort of bomb about to blow up the building. In this chapter, the are in a forest all of a sudden and Zerofuse is surrounded by symbol guardians. What happened between that point?
2. Melissa knows about the Z symbol and was chasing Shiva at the same time? It would be good to explain maybe later in the series.
Also, In a kind of morbid coincidence Melissa, Trust, and Celeron arrived in episode 8, and die 8 episodes later :P.
3. X disappears for quite a few episodes and then is killed right off the bat in this episode by a symbol who before last episode was hardly even a part in this movie. You could have made it a bit longer battle.
The battles in this movie were a bit lacking, but not as bad as the fights in SSW vs. SCD 2. First, you gave most of the hedgehogs the astro sign symbols, but only one (Sky) actually used it against the Z symbol. You could have made all of the hedgehogs that battled use their astro sign symbols, and then kill them off. Music wise, you pick the perfect selection of music for everything in this episode, so that's not a problem. My only problem that is kind of music related is when ever I click on the jukebox selection, It plays Metric Key on top of the main menu music. I know I can press stop to turn off all music, but if there is a way you could stop all music right as you open the jukebox selection that would be nice. Also, could you please add a return to main menu button at the end of the movie? Everything technical wise is ok with this movie, the only problem is the very jumpy and fast paced plot. It isn't good when now you have to deal with the plot of Static's story and the rest of the team's story. I think it would be best right now to divide the series into episodes dedicated for each story. That way you can focus on one story and not lose track of the other. Overall, effects and graphics wise, this is your best movie (I have been say that almost every movie you create, so your improving every time). As usual, take your time and don't add anymore unnecessary details unless it helps develop something in the plot. (I am not worried about you running out of ideas; the only problem is what you do with the ideas). Until next episode, good luck on SCD 4, SCD vs. SSW 3, and SCE 2 :) .
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P.S. To all who are confused about the mist part, this is what the hedgehogs are saying
Flames: Mist?? I can't see!
Trust: I don't think the watchers can read what we're saying
Trust (again): I don't need my eyes to see!
I hope it helps out some confused viewers.
P.P.S. Would you please respond to this review. I don't really care about the contest. I only care if my review is helpful and is able to clear away confusion of any type. As long as you keep creating these movies, I will try my best to write helpful reviews.
P.P.P.S. Duuuuuuuuuude, I have the same Astro as Sprint XD.
Arnas responds:
1. In episode 15, the last time you see Gingko, Sparky, and Zerofuse they were talking about some sort of bomb about to blow up the building. In this chapter, the are in a forest all of a sudden and Zerofuse is surrounded by symbol guardians. What happened between that point?
It doesn't show. It all happened off screen
2. Melissa knows about the Z symbol and was chasing Shiva at the same time? It would be good to explain maybe later in the series.
If you watch SSW8, she came out of the cyan portal.
Also, In a kind of morbid coincidence Melissa, Trust, and Celeron arrived in episode 8, and die 8 episodes later :P.
That, I didn't notice. XD
The deaths mightbe explained later in the series. A lot of people thought I was rushing things.
First, you gave most of the hedgehogs the astro sign symbols, but only one (Sky) actually used it against the Z symbol. You could have made all of the hedgehogs that battled use their astro sign symbols, and then kill them off
Just as Zerofuse didn't get his own sign. Tried to make it more realistic, heh
Also, could you please add a return to main menu button at the end of the movie?
I thought closing and re-opening the movie wouldn't be a problem lol
Static's story and the rest of the team's story. I think it would be best right now to divide the series into episodes dedicated for each story. That way you can focus on one story and not lose track of the other
That will all be explained in episode 17
Until next episode, good luck on SCD 4, SCD vs. SSW 3, and SCE 2 :) .
Thank you ;P
P.P.S. Would you please respond to this review. I don't really care about the contest. I only care if my review is helpful and is able to clear away confusion of any type. As long as you keep creating these movies, I will try my best to write helpful reviews.
LOL. I just noticed that request
It's about time!
It wasn't the best ep. ive seen but it was an improvement. Ive been watching your flash for a few years now just to let you know. Anyways don't rush the series to it's end please. And killing off all the characters like that wasn't really 100% ok either. All in all it's good.
R.I.P-Celeron,Giesy,Sprint,Trust,Mali ssa,X,Sonrioth,Shiva.
NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL GEISY?! WWHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
Arnas responds:
Since everyone is asking the same thing. It's war ;P
War involves deaths and when there are so many characters and bloody battles.. well, people die. The Z symbol is something they shouldn't mess with