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Finally done with it after a year. Everybody at your site has waited. I'm a part of that site now.
Reviews for "Sonic Syythe World 16"
Wow
That was cool it was a death scene
Still too quick on the plot of the whole movie.
I still enjoy watching the SSW series, but there is one problem that happens in this series ever since a few episodes ago. This problem is not the extreme amount of death in this movie, it's the fact that much of the plot is way to rushed and not explained well enough, or there are areas not explained at all. Let me list a few of these
1. In episode 15, the last time you see Gingko, Sparky, and Zerofuse they were talking about some sort of bomb about to blow up the building. In this chapter, the are in a forest all of a sudden and Zerofuse is surrounded by symbol guardians. What happened between that point?
2. Melissa knows about the Z symbol and was chasing Shiva at the same time? It would be good to explain maybe later in the series.
Also, In a kind of morbid coincidence Melissa, Trust, and Celeron arrived in episode 8, and die 8 episodes later :P.
3. X disappears for quite a few episodes and then is killed right off the bat in this episode by a symbol who before last episode was hardly even a part in this movie. You could have made it a bit longer battle.
The battles in this movie were a bit lacking, but not as bad as the fights in SSW vs. SCD 2. First, you gave most of the hedgehogs the astro sign symbols, but only one (Sky) actually used it against the Z symbol. You could have made all of the hedgehogs that battled use their astro sign symbols, and then kill them off. Music wise, you pick the perfect selection of music for everything in this episode, so that's not a problem. My only problem that is kind of music related is when ever I click on the jukebox selection, It plays Metric Key on top of the main menu music. I know I can press stop to turn off all music, but if there is a way you could stop all music right as you open the jukebox selection that would be nice. Also, could you please add a return to main menu button at the end of the movie? Everything technical wise is ok with this movie, the only problem is the very jumpy and fast paced plot. It isn't good when now you have to deal with the plot of Static's story and the rest of the team's story. I think it would be best right now to divide the series into episodes dedicated for each story. That way you can focus on one story and not lose track of the other. Overall, effects and graphics wise, this is your best movie (I have been say that almost every movie you create, so your improving every time). As usual, take your time and don't add anymore unnecessary details unless it helps develop something in the plot. (I am not worried about you running out of ideas; the only problem is what you do with the ideas). Until next episode, good luck on SCD 4, SCD vs. SSW 3, and SCE 2 :) .
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P.S. To all who are confused about the mist part, this is what the hedgehogs are saying
Flames: Mist?? I can't see!
Trust: I don't think the watchers can read what we're saying
Trust (again): I don't need my eyes to see!
I hope it helps out some confused viewers.
P.P.S. Would you please respond to this review. I don't really care about the contest. I only care if my review is helpful and is able to clear away confusion of any type. As long as you keep creating these movies, I will try my best to write helpful reviews.
P.P.P.S. Duuuuuuuuuude, I have the same Astro as Sprint XD.
Arnas responds:
1. In episode 15, the last time you see Gingko, Sparky, and Zerofuse they were talking about some sort of bomb about to blow up the building. In this chapter, the are in a forest all of a sudden and Zerofuse is surrounded by symbol guardians. What happened between that point?
It doesn't show. It all happened off screen
2. Melissa knows about the Z symbol and was chasing Shiva at the same time? It would be good to explain maybe later in the series.
If you watch SSW8, she came out of the cyan portal.
Also, In a kind of morbid coincidence Melissa, Trust, and Celeron arrived in episode 8, and die 8 episodes later :P.
That, I didn't notice. XD
The deaths mightbe explained later in the series. A lot of people thought I was rushing things.
First, you gave most of the hedgehogs the astro sign symbols, but only one (Sky) actually used it against the Z symbol. You could have made all of the hedgehogs that battled use their astro sign symbols, and then kill them off
Just as Zerofuse didn't get his own sign. Tried to make it more realistic, heh
Also, could you please add a return to main menu button at the end of the movie?
I thought closing and re-opening the movie wouldn't be a problem lol
Static's story and the rest of the team's story. I think it would be best right now to divide the series into episodes dedicated for each story. That way you can focus on one story and not lose track of the other
That will all be explained in episode 17
Until next episode, good luck on SCD 4, SCD vs. SSW 3, and SCE 2 :) .
Thank you ;P
P.P.S. Would you please respond to this review. I don't really care about the contest. I only care if my review is helpful and is able to clear away confusion of any type. As long as you keep creating these movies, I will try my best to write helpful reviews.
LOL. I just noticed that request
Astro signs!! :P
Wow this serie is turning out to be loaded with content. First the symbols and now astro powers? Well for fun fact I'm same as Static so I'm happy. As for the flash itself We are finally approaching a possible end since the dark messenger as slain so many characters. The quality of animation remains good and you used some nice music in there. Wonder who will stand in the end? Keep up the good work Arnas, I support you!! (Note: There's a random glitch. If you click on the music button on the main menu sometimes it takes you to a random scene. Some of your older flashes had this problem as well.)
NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL GEISY?! WWHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
Arnas responds:
Since everyone is asking the same thing. It's war ;P
War involves deaths and when there are so many characters and bloody battles.. well, people die. The Z symbol is something they shouldn't mess with