i liked it more than the grandma jerk
especially because there were some more funny animated features like the hotdogs falling out the stand if you shoot at it and the bloody death animation.
but i also have some hints: the text goes a bit too fast, make it disappear a bit later. i am no retard, i can read, but i needed to see the whole stuff twice before i got what it said.
also, you should (in my opinion) add much more 'triggerpoints', if you know what i mean.
anyway, keep up the good work