Eh...
Theres alot of things to like about this flash, the art for the most part was nice for example, and the fact you made it in a mere 2 weeks is amazing, but there where alot of things that just didn't gel with me.
I suppose ill start with the mouths, i quite like the overly expressive style but at the same time the rest of the character wasn't anywhere near as expressive, the body acting and facial expressions for example where never as extreme as the mouths which kind of made the mouths distracting and in a way, maybe even out of place.
My other 2 main gripes where with the voice acting and the time of the piece, the voices weren't particularly exciting to listen to, they all sounded rather flat in fact. Which kind of made it less interesting to watch, but when you stick the fact it just kept going and going on top of it, it was just too much. You could have easily shaved a minute off this without loosing any impact.
So i guess what im saying is, in short, i personally found this to be a rather generic cartoon, which was very similar to most stuff found on the likes of CN and Nick, and i don't mean that in a positive way. I much preferred you Too Much Spare Time animation.
And if your wondering why i have taken the time to write this, its because i know your capable of alot more then this.