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Reviews for "emo story"

A nice start

The game in it's self was too easy and very short, and a bit longer of a game would be appreciated. It took me 3 tries before I realized the spike could be walked through and to pass that darn cute spider. Also, there were alot of moments where it just.. froze in mid air or something, one time I encountered a glitch where there was the text from the sign selling Razors and a floating bush. So the 'error' button was a good idea, but you really should try and make a save system or checkpoint instead or to be able to speed through by means of button.

Though I have to disagree with Paint It Black as an 'emo' song, but otherwise a nice track. More transparent spikes, don't give hints on the boss (natural human instinct to press the giant red button), and maybe the boss could bounce around aimlessly instead of up and down. A health bar, crouch option, and to change direction while jumping in the air might be good ideas. Hope this helps!

4/10 for a good start to a game and for the flowing animation.

Needs Refinement

This could be interesting, but there were too many bugs I discovered, such as getting stuck at certain points and the character always appearing backwards in a new area. There is no excuse for not bug testing something before releasing it. Try again, you can do it!

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This kid became emo from PLAYING THIS!

Gotta give it a chance

A little to simple i think it should of had more to it such as guns or power,lookin forward to part 2

Well....

You need to work on the bugs a bit. Next time you should make your "EMO" move forward a little bit when he falls instead of going straight down. i died a few times because of that. I think the game could be good if you fixed it up a little bit and and made it a little bit harder.

maybe next time you could make your enemies razors if he is running away from them. just a thought.