Hmm...
You need more emotion in the voice acting.
Reviews for "Sonic Origins part 3"
What's with your sound effects?
Now your sound effects are dropping out of synch, I do hope the next part does not have this same problem. I also found that this moved FAR too quickly. I do hope the next part isn't this quick, or you and I are going to have some issues. Finnaly, you still suffer from large amounts of spelling and grammer issues, and the text doesn't always match the voice acting. 3/5
Awesome
This is getting good keep going but many of the voice actors dont have any emotions in their lines.
it was ok
It was fine for pixel animation, but as a Sonic fan the story doesn't work this way. If you were trying for your own point of view for the story, you made it go far too fast. Slow it down and add a bit more background to the characters. And the name change for Robotnik thing was too easy to figure out that his new name was his old just backwards. To go further, why would eggman just go right into making a robot army and want to rule over all hedgehogs and mobians and then create Shadow? Not much sense in your story. In summary, go more in depth.