Reviews for Final Fantasy:FoH ep1 pt2

[ColdReaver]

Great stuff

For a final fantasy-esque story it's pretty interesting so far. The drawings can be alittle better, but that comes with practice, keep going with it and it'll shine through =)
The tweening is good for the most part, but could be more fluid, It just seems like in some scenes it's kinda choppy. Otherwise it's not a huge deal, just work on it and you'll get better at it.

I'll 5've you anyway. Just make the next ones alittle longer. NG has a 10MB limit so I'm sure you can squeeze in ALOT more.
Overall, I liked it!

[Mac-N-Trash1014]

its so good fo something so short

if these were only a little longer!!!!!!!!!!!
I was getting into it and then blam the start button pops up.....I want to see the end :(

The-almighty-EK responds:

The last part is on DA, (see link above) The last part will be uploaded tomorrow.

[DannTe]

Awesome!

wow i love it so far :)
nice work

[Ritrox]

Nice

I like this series so far, and I have a few suggestions that may help.

First, it is difficult to hear the voice actors so you may want to either add subtitles, or practice speaking louder without changing the tone of voice.

Next, there is no rush to get things done. Take your time and practice drawing with the mouse. No one is going to criticize you for taking time off to improve your art skills.

Finally, I like the original story you've made. If you ever feel like you've reached a writer's block, then take a walk around the block or something to relax you so thoughts flow better.

;D

The-almighty-EK responds:

Thanks, I will keep that in mind ^_^