nice.
Hint: It's not really plot driven, you can skip most of the dialogue, just keep an eye out for directions on what spot to shoot the target in, and for physical and behavior descriptions.
For mahself, I loved the shooting, good gameplay. The style is what it is, I neither liked nor disliked it. But reading through those interminable dialogues made me not care about the story. It's well written, but I think you could have made it more interesting with a little editing.