May the flash be with you.
I am always up to see a good ninja fight,
but I'd like the fight to feel more epic.
I don't think that a ninja would use a nuclear white weapon, it's not there style.
Also, you're animtoin skills have met there prime.
I forgive alot for this being your frist submistoin.
Good luck.
Keep it up!
Keep up the good work!
It's not bad
This is a decent flash for being one of your first submissions. Faster action, and maybe a distinguishing characteristic or two on the faces would improve it. All in all, though, not too shabby. Keep working at it.
decent
Pretty good for a first flash. I would suggest adding some light background music, speeding up the animation (fighting sequences are usually a bit more fast paced), and adding something to the stickmen to look more like a ninja (ie steel-plated headband , face half covered, etc.). I would also reccomend shortening the smoke scene.
well you show potential
and thats what makes good animator