haha
Well that was awesome. I admit that the narrating was a bit loud, but the drawings and animation were great. And I love the story.
Reviews for "The Greedy Fox"
KFoxyFox responds:
Yes, the narrating made the sound skip a little bit. I might completely nix that for the next time ^^
Nice animation
I think you need a preloader or something, it goes straight to the play button at the beginning. Voice spoke a little to fast and too much pop in the mic.
KFoxyFox responds:
I don't actually know how to make a pre-loader, and that has been bugging me for a while now. I ought to look it up sometime.
this is...pretty good! :)
this wuz a pretty decent flash! the animation couldve been a teency weency little bit better, but i know u tried ur best. keep up the good work!
wow
lol a lesson well learned
I thought he got eaten
The way I remember it, he was stuck, the sheperds came, and they saw he ate all the food, so they pulled him out of the tree and ate him for lunch. Afterwards I belive they had some nice fox gloves as well :)
As for a suggestion to this, talk a bit slower and a bit more understandably. It was sort of a blur of sound near the end,so just watch that next time. other than that, it was alright.
9/10 and 5/5