Quit the stickmen!
Lol, you need to improve, upgrade form STICKMEN to FULL-PERSONS... Poor TommyVF, the only full-person part.
Well, not a good collab, not very original either. Try harder.
You get a 4 because of Tommy's great part :P
-Marcy
Reviews for "the cliff collab"
ScrewedComedy responds:
i know butt when i started the collab i only draw sticks
Ok well,
I hate to say it screwed but,I'm afraid you and nggangsterpimp did the worse
Really unoriginal idea,This,Doesnt deserve its score,You all tryed hard and everything but,It just wasnt that good,
also,
I have NO IDEA Why you let nggangsterpimps cliff in that collab,Its terrible
Not good.
Nope, I'm sorry but this collab just isn't good.
Here are some reasons and ways to improve it:
To ScrewedComedy, I can see you just wanted to finish and submit this collab as fast as you can, there are not much members and not much great parts (only 2! D: ). You didn't even took time to make a good preloader...
ScrewedComedy, when you make a collab, you work together with other people so if you screw it up, you also screw it up for those other people.
Some suggestions:
if you make a collab, don't just accept everyone who wants to join, there are a lot of crappy animators in the flash forum so only accept the ones that are average or good. (:
Also, to get some great animators you could PM people who joined other collabs, this gives you a bigger chance of getting better people in your collab.
And last, give your collab SOME TIME! :D
-
Anyway, why don't I like this submission?
I always hated those stupid 'Cliff' animations but I thought this collab could have been cool but not, this collab is just some of those hateful animations together. D:
Too much stickmans, too much madness, too much crappy animations.
-
But, there are SOME good parts, 2 actually. :3
I likes 1 of your parts ScrewedComedy, you have a good and funny stickman style and I liked the part of Tommy, it was too short but good. :D
So you, I didn't really enjoyed this collab but if you make another one in future, keep my suggestions in mind. :)
Bertn
ScrewedComedy responds:
okay
Interesting
Love the music
Was interesting, made me laugh at some parts and just freak me out at other parts.
Eh.
Kinda lame.
Overused idea, poor animation style and sloppily done most of the time.