Reviews for Nolims: Episode 1

[Satoris]

Um...

I'll have to agree with the person below me, the writing was a little weak. And Skulsta, when somebody refers to the "writing" aspect of a piece they mean a little bit more than just spelling. They mean character development, believability of the situation (even if the piece is Sci-Fi/fantasy), words and phrases the characters would used based on their personality and so on and so forth. You have a good idea going but maybe bring it back down to Earth a little bit and give me something that I can sink my teeth into. The story seems a bit outlandish.

Skulsta responds:

Ok, but just try to remember I did this when I was 10. So yeah.

PS Its my birthday today woot.

[Dilarus]

riiiiiiiiight...

you defeated the entire USA army?
music was fitting for the action, completely out of place for the part when hes walking down a hallway.

but damn the writing sucks
the ENTIRE USA army?

Skulsta responds:

Well it shouldn't be too hard too beat such a lame army. I mean heck they wouldn't even beat half of the NZ army!

And what'd ya mean the writing sucks? I don't have a single typo or bad grammar. It's better than yours. Music fitting for action? What does that mean? And I dont see any problem with the hallway scene. And its THE hallway not A hallway. Learn proper grammar.

[texan94]

nice dude

All I have to say is make more because it was great!!!!!!

Skulsta responds:

Oh don't you worry about that.

[JustAnotherUser]

okay...

it was cool, but your character was just some mix of madness and thing-thing (both series are cool, so your character is cool, too). well, i liked it.

Skulsta responds:

Thanx. Yes I do know that they are similar. But I'm telling you it is all coincidental.

[Helter-Skelter]

copy

this is almost an exact copy of the thing thing story and don't pretend you don't know what thing thing is

Skulsta responds:

Yes I do know what it is. And yes it is similar but only by coincidence. I drew that comic before I knew what it was.