I loved it.
I personally loved it and think you have allot of talent. I can't wait to see more and as for the length it was perfect. Not short to the point where I demand more and no to long where I may have to pause it and finish it later.
Since your not to happy with the animation (which I still loved) may I suggest making a remake someday and if this flash series becomes popular a DVD wouldn't be a bad idea and if the remakes are exclusive to it might help sell it. Making a flash like this requires allot of time and effort and I think you deserve a little something for it.