Hmm....
Well, it was a bit...pants. You could have added more. Lots more.
Reviews for "Target Poochie"
It was too slow paced and nothing really happened.
The whole movie was just really slow paced, you showed the guy just in his bed for ages, then the dog started barking and he was still there for quite a while, it wasn't very interesting at this point but you made it look like it was building up to something big when all that happened was that he shot the dog, which wasn't really that interesting and it wasn't much of an event, perhaps you could have added more to it and he could have gone on a dog killing spree or something, just anything to give the movie some sort of event taking place. You also had the gun shooting scene too slow paced as you showed the guy getting ready to pull the trigger for far too long and again it created the sense that some bug event was going to happen but dissaponted when nothing major took place. The animation after that was very poor as the guy flying through the air backwards was just motion-tweened and it just didn't look good at all. The sound was also of a poor quality, the song at the end was fine, it was just the sound within the movie itself.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
1/5