You know how to impress people.
Even though I wrote a review to Metal Gear Funnies, I've decided to review your "deluxe edition" of your part. Firstly, the characters were well-animated and I loved that "Nerd from Hell" caricature even though some of my friends are fat nerds. The only problem with this is that there is an animation error where Snake throws the ball, and his Five 'o Clock Shadow is gone. Soundwise, the music selection was perfect, and the voices are well done. However, the sound of Snake's voice was off, but chances are that you don't give a shit. Then there's the content: You intended this to be satire against the deluge of videogame parodies and that therein lies the problem. Videogame parodies and sprite movies have been around for eight years, to the point where even satire like this has no effect on them. If you want to kill the medium that you consider an idiocity and get more people to create original cartoons; then you need to create more original cartoons and encourage originality.
What I liked about this:
-Great animation
-The Nerd from Hell caricature
-Great voice acting
-The Music selection
What I didn't like:
-One Continuity Error
-The fact that satire like this has no effect and won't contribute to anything.
Overall: Here's your nine out of ten, but you may want to continue your Project Freetown series instead of wasting time with satire.