Great:)
I love the story:)
I don't really like the blood animations that much, they could be more smooth, since you made the explosions and such really good!:)
And at other places you should put some more effort in it and it would came out more smooth and you would get a higher score:) anyway its great:)
Did...Di...
You use a Decomplier for those some flash there ?
Fine, but..
...I have to agree with Chaosportalfilms. I did like the idea and the general stuff, but I disliked how you did use animations already done by others. You could've used their Characters (with permission) and made your own Flash with them, but you shouldn't have cut whole scenes from the originals. Especially since it did really disturb in terms of fitting to your own style and to each other.
Also, I think Requiem for a Dreams - even though I really like that song - is used way to often in every kind of "dramatic" scene. You could've used something else there.
Anyways, before this comment stops in negative points only: I did like the idea and the general storyline, what you made of it. But next time: Do everything by yourself ;)
Meh
The "comedic" NG characters (like Tankmen and Bitey) seem out of place in your serious plot. You basically neutered them by removing what makes them special...their comedic value.
And then you went off on this stereotypical "ZOMG! Teh Ultimate Fight scene!" tangent, with two guys flying and warping around while shooting lasers and shit (which is a concept so played out by now that it's tedious and boring to watch) ... I just lost interest.
The Naru-tards and Dragon Ball Z fanboys are going to all vote a conformist 10 on this because it's "serious" and "action-packed", so I figured I'd provide a different perspective.
well that was quite the gauntlet to sit through
ill tell you everything that was wrong with it so you can improve for the future. First off this is what bothered me the most. Was i watching a SLIDESHOW or an animation? because with all the motion tweening i honestly could not tell the difference. A little fbf animation here and there would be nice honestly. Another would be the same generic font overkilled in everything (impact) switch it up to something different. The lack of SOUND FX really ruined the whole mood for me put that in next time. The song is....alright but way overkilled so put something more original next time. Don't rip clips from other animations such as backrounds/characters even if you got their permission too. It just makes their work look that much better then yours so its almost like your dumbing down yourself. Don't overuse the same special fx over and over again such as..cough cough motion tweening cough cough and blur effect. If you completed one of the points i listed above you would have easily scored atleast 3 points higher. the 5 was for story and dedication to the animation and the newgrounds community but that doesn't guarentee you a high score in my books so sry to be the bearer of bad news but keep at it you still got a ways to go