Happy Jim Day!
This is the first one I saw, so given this sample, I'd say hes very fortunate, or perhaps unfortunate, to still be alive! Anyways, my chief complaint is that it is some what short.
Reviews for "Jim Day 08"
Jimtopia responds:
As is almost everyones chief complaint. Thanks for reviewing.
Nice!
I truly enjoyed this. I'm going to have to agree with Diyakinos in saying that the only thing that really could have made this better would be to make it a longer than 80 seconds.
Ooof oh ouch oh pain!
Jimtopia responds:
Gotta make the next one longer.
Great!
Great work. Its actually quite hard to say anything else. Apart from the fact I wished it was longer!
Jimtopia responds:
Yeah that seems to be the main complaint.
Happy Birthday, Jim!
Though it's certainly not your best flash for plot, you've certainly given us a few good laughs with the jokes that you've put into this piece. I think that this is really a result of your Jim & Pals shorts that you've been writing over the past year - you've been setting up one gag, followed by the punchline.
The graphics are great, as always and to be honest, I'd just try to come up with something a little longer that isn't just a slapstick reel. Slapstick is your best medium, but putting something a little more serious in there wouldn't hurt your cause as well - kind of like Laurel and Hardy
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Jimtopia responds:
Yeah well, given the time constraints and blah-dee blah yeah, glad you enjoyed it though, I'll try to come up with something a little more... IDK better for next year.
not so bad.
I was hoping for something better.
Jimtopia responds:
Me too...?