meh
it was ok, ill give u a 5 cuz i like liked the fridge part
if u work on the animation and find a less "emo" voice actor i think u'll be better off as far as flash animation goes:P
Reviews for "Jim Day 08"
fans?
What there are fans to this stuff?
Jimtopia responds:
Yes.
Well...
Now, please understand that this is just for constructive purposes, but i mean come on. Really? The animation needs ALOT of work, and yeah, the jokes really aren't that funny. I'm jsut saying, please work on the audio and the other stuff too, only out of hope that you can make better animations. The only part I really liked was the hands in the fridge, that was inventive, and for that, I won't give you a 1.
Keep on trying!
It was cute
at best. I understand that you were rushed for time, so I give you props and what you did do. The voice actor WAS slightly out of place for your character, but some nice jokes mingled in (yes, like the fridge. Nice touch). Could've done without him falling down the stairs and "OH NO, MY FANS ARE WAITING!" thing. Other than that, it was decent. However, I still think you deserve more than a "1". It wasn't BAD...
I look forward to viewing some more of your stuff, though!
<3 Sapphire
Jimtopia responds:
Cool, thanks for not being a jerk in your review.
Not very good
My constructive criticism is you should
Get a different voice actor. As that voice is too high pitched and childish sounding.
Get better jokes. You can look in a children's joke book for better jokes than these.
Make it longer. The fact that this animation is already void of anything remotely interesting is exacerbated by the fact that it is also incredibly short.
So improve these things and go try to make a decent animation with hopefully not the same main character you used in this one. ...hooray i guess.
Jimtopia responds:
Hey, if you don't like slapstick that's fine, it's not for everyone. And I AM going to use the same main character, so I'd suggest you just not watch any of my other cartoons.