Odd mix
Ok, I like your animating style and you seem to know how to make a quality cartoon but you are trying to mix styles that just plain don't go together. I think you'd to better to make it more serious. Go for a horror film rather than trying to pass horror for comedy. The laugh track and friendly intro just didn't sit well with me. It was worth a shot but I don't think I'd try it again.
I'll be looking forward to your next piece though.