Reaallllu REEEEEAALY Cheezy...
Too cheezy, not much animation skill as its just sprites... meh... could of saved it with a good story line..
Reviews for "Little Fighter Alpha Ch.9"
MaxR responds:
Sorry, I'll try improving the story line, or maybe you could watch the previous chapters for story developement.
ok job!
the animation and fighting scenes is ok, but the story becomes boring after some minutes.
MaxR responds:
Sorry to disappoint, I'll try improving the fights and story next chapter!
How did I miss this?
This totally flew under my radar for almost a year. How I missed it, I'll never know.
Music transitions are crappy. Needs less fade in/out, and more time to play. The song gets revved up, I'm getting excited for the battle ahead, and before I know it, the song dies out and transitions to another scene. This happens --every. single. time.--
The story also seems rather lacking. I remember reviewing this years ago, saying the episodes are getting shorter, and you were saying you were being kinder to the 56k users out there, but your series has finally gotten stale.
Your episodes now feel like this: Fight scene, transition, fight scene, obligatory plot twist(s) out of nowhere, cliffhang.
Your fight scenes are still superb, but you definitely need more work elsewhere. Your plot twists seem to be thrown in just for the sake of having a plot twist. Put some more effort in the storyline, and this serious will improve loads.
MaxR responds:
I don't blame ya, It did took me 3 years to release Ch.9 since Ch.8
Sorry for the bad edits, I noticed this myself over the years and your suggestion helped when I created Ch.10, less music transitions now :)
Thanks for your suggestion on the story line too, in honesty I started making this series to supplement my fight scenes, but there's so much potential in the story line as well. In Ch.10 and Ch.11 I hope you see such improvements.
it hmm
i didnt really like it but it has neat sound affeacts
MaxR responds:
I see.
oh shit that was awsom!!!!
i enjoyed it i really did if you had put some more blood in it i mite have voted a 5
MaxR responds:
You're going to like the next one then.