WOW!!
By the time Bat was dead i knew something was going to happen with him and the Lord!!!
Amazing!!Hurry up and finish the story. :)
Reviews for "Little Fighter Alpha Ch.9"
MaxR responds:
lol yeah, thanks, I planned it all along.
I Waited... And Now I am Content
This was such a great sprite flash. I love your series - it is so great. The plot, how you use the characters of LF2 are just amazing. I really admire you!
But, what is a review without some constructive criticism? (I'm not trying to burn or insult you. You are by far a much greater flasher than I'll ever be) I like all your fighting scenes with the minions (Monks, Sorcerers), and your character fights just blow me away. The problem is the final ending. The ending of a fight should be climatic and energizing. You fights are so awesome, but they don't end as well.
John, for example, died in 1 second from a laser to the head. Louis EX died from a flaming kick. Freeze died (But he's still alive) from an uppercut and Firen died from a kick into a pool of lava. Final moves should be epic in my opinion. Why not try adding a godly finishing move?
Woody (Probably one of the best characters - I love your characte development)
could maybe flip kick someone into the air and then own them with thousands of flaming kicks. I just don't like your work being down-graded because of a bad ending.
My favourite chapter by far is the 8th. I love the Freeze fight because it was a 5v1. Freeze froze the Little Fighters one by one and tornado-ed them out of the way to make them seem unimportant. That was very good theatre placement. Putting the main action in front of the viewer and pushing away others. I also love how Deep came to the rescue!
You have very good flash skills and a sense for action, just remember that little details also add to the whole thing, and that is what sometimes makes a piece of work good. (Not saying that your's is bad)
Your skills amaze me so much. I just love your work so much! Please take my thoughts into consideration for your next flash. Hope it comes out soon! Don't make me wait, I want to see Firzen and Julien!
SCK... (Please Respond!)
PS. Bat is a badguy? He is my favourite character in the series and in the actual game! At least make him good again! Please?
MaxR responds:
Thank you for your long well thought review, so here goes!
Your positive comments really motivate me to continue this series and work at Ch.10 faster and I appreciate how you noticed what I was trying to do with the story of this series. First of all, I do agree that most of my endings are anti-climatic and I would say, rushed. It has almost become a tradition for me to rushing the endings either to excitement to submit or tired of animating. I always have these dramatic endings in mind but rarely execute them because I'm afraid of making the characters too powerful, but I realize by not doing that it's doing more harm than good. I do take your thoughts into consideration and any criticism will help improve on my next movie. Another person said the same thing to me, that I should pay attention to details, and I agree. As I make the movie, I will slowly get into the details more and more so I can hopefully perfect it.
If you enjoyed Ch.8, you will surely enjoy Ch.10, let's just say the numbers are doubled.
And as to what happens next, you'll find out, soon enough....
-MaxR
WOW!!
Very good!
MaxR responds:
Thank you.
DAM
Dam dude that was fking impressive i never seen ur flash but ima guess ther awsome i give this a 20/10 =D
MaxR responds:
lol thanks for the 20/10.
thx for it
wow wat have u been tooking so long on there are alot of ppl waiting for u make 1. and i saw a update at a website. yeah its the best out of all of the 9. p.s is 10 going to be the last 1? and davis is half brother to bat?
MaxR responds:
It's a good thing you heard Ch.9 was out from a website, I didn't think word would get out after all these years. Many things happened that delayed the release of Ch.9, and Ch. 10 isn't the last chapter, Ch. 12 is.