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Reviews for "Little Fighter Alpha Ch.9"

nice

"woody, the ambushed us from behind". Gay overtone?
good vid.

MaxR responds:

lol if you put it that way.

This was good...

I liked this flash. It played out like a movie like it was actually based off the game. THe Little Fighter Series is one of my favorite series and the way you made it looked like it was a real movie. Good work.

MaxR responds:

Thanks, I try incorporating the game play of the game into the story of my series.

good

it was pretty good had me going for a little bit... Reminds me of dragon ball z

MaxR responds:

Yeah I think the creator of this game had influence from DBZ for sure.

make a game

a game will be a good idea o and this was good in all there no way any one cant give it 10

MaxR responds:

Actually there is a game of this! That's where the sprites are from. You can find the game in one of the links in the movie. Although the game won't have as many moves as I created in my series, it has the basic moves that inspired me to create new ones.

I Waited... And Now I am Content

This was such a great sprite flash. I love your series - it is so great. The plot, how you use the characters of LF2 are just amazing. I really admire you!

But, what is a review without some constructive criticism? (I'm not trying to burn or insult you. You are by far a much greater flasher than I'll ever be) I like all your fighting scenes with the minions (Monks, Sorcerers), and your character fights just blow me away. The problem is the final ending. The ending of a fight should be climatic and energizing. You fights are so awesome, but they don't end as well.

John, for example, died in 1 second from a laser to the head. Louis EX died from a flaming kick. Freeze died (But he's still alive) from an uppercut and Firen died from a kick into a pool of lava. Final moves should be epic in my opinion. Why not try adding a godly finishing move?

Woody (Probably one of the best characters - I love your characte development)
could maybe flip kick someone into the air and then own them with thousands of flaming kicks. I just don't like your work being down-graded because of a bad ending.

My favourite chapter by far is the 8th. I love the Freeze fight because it was a 5v1. Freeze froze the Little Fighters one by one and tornado-ed them out of the way to make them seem unimportant. That was very good theatre placement. Putting the main action in front of the viewer and pushing away others. I also love how Deep came to the rescue!

You have very good flash skills and a sense for action, just remember that little details also add to the whole thing, and that is what sometimes makes a piece of work good. (Not saying that your's is bad)

Your skills amaze me so much. I just love your work so much! Please take my thoughts into consideration for your next flash. Hope it comes out soon! Don't make me wait, I want to see Firzen and Julien!

SCK... (Please Respond!)

PS. Bat is a badguy? He is my favourite character in the series and in the actual game! At least make him good again! Please?

MaxR responds:

Thank you for your long well thought review, so here goes!
Your positive comments really motivate me to continue this series and work at Ch.10 faster and I appreciate how you noticed what I was trying to do with the story of this series. First of all, I do agree that most of my endings are anti-climatic and I would say, rushed. It has almost become a tradition for me to rushing the endings either to excitement to submit or tired of animating. I always have these dramatic endings in mind but rarely execute them because I'm afraid of making the characters too powerful, but I realize by not doing that it's doing more harm than good. I do take your thoughts into consideration and any criticism will help improve on my next movie. Another person said the same thing to me, that I should pay attention to details, and I agree. As I make the movie, I will slowly get into the details more and more so I can hopefully perfect it.

If you enjoyed Ch.8, you will surely enjoy Ch.10, let's just say the numbers are doubled.

And as to what happens next, you'll find out, soon enough....

-MaxR