Not bad...
Not bad for a first vid, but a preloading screen would be nice! It froze on me a little too much!
Reviews for "The Brotherhood of Light"
knobbywood responds:
i'm working on that... for some reason the NG preloaders aren't working right with my flash file
A First Timer!?
Surprised me. Your skills aren't bad, and in fact, they're good. The animation was solid, and the fighting was pretty was even better than the average fighting videos I see here. My only real gripe is the lack of sound effects in the fighting itself, which would have been a great fit with the music, and the backgrounds.
Keep up your practice and I can see some excellence in the future for you.
Good.
If there had been a story or a dialogue of some kind this could be a great flash. It has good animation.
Boring
Dude you should not make this movise cuz it sucks really