Reviews for BEEP BEEP

[BeatEmorBurnEm]

promising.

The quality of art was pretty basic, but very stylized so it suited the animation well. I wouldn't change anything about that. The white blog changing shapes + beepy music reminded me of the old game "A Boy and his Blob", haha.
My main gripe would be the length, and the lack of purpose. It would be really hilarious/interesting to see this featureless little guy walking around or going somewhere during the music, instead of just staying in the 1 shot. Definitely a good basis for something in the future, though!!

Rutger responds:

Thanks! You definatly motivate me C:

[TheGoldElite]

I like electro kinda stuff

..But this isnt my thing, well animated though, but it just wasnt really interesting for me.

[FriendsCallMeBob]

Not bad, but...

...not very original. Quite artistic, but the white guy resembles, as Super-Batman said, Chocolateman (or any other LazyMuffin-character) a bit too much. The music is nice, but since you didn't compose it yourself, it's not thát special. Try making it a little longer in the future, build in some story and use your own characters.

Anyway, 5/10 for the effort.

Rutger responds:

WTF this is my own character!

Thanks for your effort to write something anyhow

[fearing]

hmm

I didnt like this.. I found it awkward to watch and pointless. I dont see why it got on the front page.

ill give you 5/10 for the synching to the music and maybe some nice morphing, other than that its short, pointless and mildly entertaining.

Id hate for you to take this the wrong way so I'll just tell you some things that Id prefer you did.

- Change the background
- Have some sort of point and if youre going to do an arty sort of experimenting animation, make it longer and maybe add some more angles and stuff
-sound effects
-Spend more time on graphics - I know a lot of people on this website like this sort of catroony squishy characters and drawing style, but it really pays off to do some life drawing and stuff.

Keep at it though, dont be too disheartened by my comment, you obviously have some sort of potential because you have a front page submission - regardless of whether I liked it or not.

[Crimsononic]

wellz...

it was short, and had no real point. wasn't funny. but animation was ok and its original. there really is no bad side or good side to this, except make it longer or something.