ha ha ha lol
ha ha ha funny monkey.
Reviews for "Sweet Summer Break"
lmao
i thought this was pretty average until the final fantasy ds joke
i actually loled at that
animation and everything else was fine, and it did drag on but it was slightly interesting so good work ; D
LOL
"Wow you really have thought of everything" LOL
Hohohoho.
Wonderful in it's wit. Surprising, that. Others may not have taken the oppurtunity to question that outloud. "20 minutes? 2 DSes? I guess it's fine if I ignore this fallacy, but eh." I might not have clicked, and that was nearly unfortunate.
Keep it up!
Not Bad
Its not bad but it drags on a little
JKR responds:
Thanks. I'll try to work on making sure it doesn't drag in the future. The trouble is that Fred cartoons tend to not be very "actiony" so sometimes they feel slow. Glad you enjoyed it anyway, and thanks for the review.