heh
the story was bad the animating was eh allright and the drawings were okay all in all this was a preaty deacent flash ''better than the other stuff i c ppl sumbitting'' i give it a 5/10 2/5
Reviews for "When I'm Running"
haha cool
i liked it good job
Nice.
Awesome job. The only thing I would suggest is to maybe have a different font, doesn't seem to fit exactly..but that could just be me. Other than that awesome job:)
OxSox responds:
Yeah, you know I kind of agree with you. Font selection is an aspect of life I have very little skill in. When I become a famous animator with a large team of assistants, I will have someone dedicated solely to choosing font for me. Until then you'll have to put up with my half baked choices. Thanks for the review.
it's okay but
I worry about you when that's your feelings at runnig ;)
OxSox responds:
Hey I run a lot and I've never been a danger to anyone. Not due to dinosaurs, anyway.
Woke up extra early today... [727]
Checklist:
Gettin' some quick saves towards my b/p retirement goals on some of the 4 under judgement movies before I make some coffee... check.
Saw a flash with an interesting title... okay, let's have a look... check.
... WAIT, the movie starts with an animation of a jogger? Well, this is a fitting time of hell (i.e. morning) for such a flash, at least... Is this movie going to be boring, I wonder? Wait... there's some interesting things going on in the background... as he runs down each block... and especially as he crosses the cross streets... WTF? Burning... car... And whoa, the running animation cycle is... kinda fascinating in and of itself.
BOOM. Cowboys From Hell kicks in and T-Rex is imaginarily (can you believe that's a real word, BTW? I was about to write "fake word FTW here!" but then googled it real quick just to make sure there wasn't a slightly different spelling to make it proper, and... boom. O_O) making you run faster.
That's some great stuff. It was so great and surreal that it (plus the time of morning and lack of coffee, likely, which often have a... magnifying effect on surreality) compelled me to review right away, when I normally just make a shortcut to the flash entry and dump it in a "to be reviewed" folder with like 400 other movies and games. So, congrats on that, too! #;-}>
Great music choice, great concept, great execution. What better three ways to make a flash on NG are there? Someone let me know. Kudos, sir! KUDOS!
OxSox responds:
Sadly, judging by the score not everyone on NG has the same criteria as you. Do you ever wonder what makes some movies great scores and what makes some movie get mediocre ones? Well that's a whine for another time. Anyways, thanks for the review, a review like this is what makes artists like me keep going. Also, I'm actually pretty stoked on the word imaginarily. I'm going to try to use it randomly in conversation more.