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Reviews for "TS_BS_trailer"

hey read this plz

i gave u five stars cause it was so funny wen they were funny it look like my sons drawings lolololol oh and at the beginning turn down the music i little down it makes your '''voice acting''' sound bad

Vova-Zknight responds:

I read it thx.

It has potential.

The idea was interesting, but there are a few problems that did some serious damage to your score.

First off, the music often cut off in a bad place, making it sound choppy and just... not so well done. If you absolutely can't let a song continue until it ends, try to refrain from stopping it in the middle of the crescendo.

The in-movie text... grammar. That's all I can say. Grammar. Fix it. Please.

Some of the animations could go a lot smoother, even if you are a novice at Flash. May I suggest using the GIMP (gimp.org) to create a gradient when his skin is turning purple instead of filling in a bunch of squares?

Voice acting was good, but just put a LITTLE more emotion into the tones.

Overall, like I said, it has potential. As it is, though, it just doesn't work.

Vova-Zknight responds:

Thank you.
1.I agree the music stoped a little not in time.
2.GIMP - I'll think about it.

I'll work on it.

Not that good...

The flash wasn't that good. The graphics sucked, except for the sword. I don't even know what it's about! Other than something coming soon.

Vova-Zknight responds:

OK OK that's sometimes happend)