Hey, this is a nice flash...
...and I like it!
Here's what I think needs some improvement. The art is simple and easy, but I seem to see some inconsistency with your drawing. The pace of the movement (whether it be character movement or cameral movement etc) is a bit slow for my taste. Did you make the flash at 15 fps?
Overall, I've got no complaints on this flash, could do with a little improvement though. Keep up the good work bro!