r.e.v.i.e.w.
Nice animutation. I laughed a lot. The graphics were of course pretty primitive but the cranberry juice made it all better. Thinking about the Catcher In The Rye was good too.
All joking aside, I thought this was a funny Flash. The only thihng that was kind of annoying is that it was a loop, but it definately showed some creativity. Also, try getting a pre-loader next time.
~ Z
Well...
Indeed, the author commentary is glorious. I also think that Aaron Carter would be 100% cooler with that haircut (remember what anything multiplied by zero is though). I do enjoy Peter Griffin's rendition of "Can't Touch This." Other than that, I feel a bit like a proverbial Arthur Dent critiquing the Vogon poetry (this is a Hitchiker's Guide reference). I DO indeed find it difficult to express in any way how this particular piece could be improved, though I think you should continue to try. It's a bit like if at a spelling bee one were to spell a word in a made up language when they came to the podium. It would be impossible to tell if it's spelled correctly, let alone where individual errors occurred. How do you correct something like that? That's how you'd improve this flash. Good luck.
I dropped your score .02 points! YES!
You get a two for the authors comments, because they were glorious, and that made me happy. However being that you video sucked shitty ass, because...
1) Loop... Didn't ever stop looping...
2) No structure... Hard to rate...
3) The pictures were mildly entertaining, while normally that'd be good, in this case it was attached to other pictures, and there were far to many...
However the author comments were very entertaining...
Dear BFOverlord,
1)The Looping is an artisitic effect to this flash, it makes it feel like the wonderful feeling of freedom and rejuvination will never end.
2) There is structure in this classic Adam Phillips - style flash. I spent almost 9 months on it's storyboard. its about a sophomore student who tries to find himself in the overly beaurocratic land of new jersey.
3) All the pictures provided an artistic expierience for the average viewer. and they all symbloize a virtue in life.
wow
it looks like im the few people who r generious enough to do this
From 1.58 to 1.56.
Find everything that you think needs improvement in this animation and remove it, just to see how it would look. Unless, of course, you've already done that, which it looks like you have. I would suggest removing more and making those better as well. Take that tree on back to your workshop and fix that light that won't light on one side, then bring it back here.