Here's what I think could have been improved:
This movie really only has one flaw: It moves too slowly. The art, animation, and sounds would gel so much better without the pauses between the action and the lines. Yes, that would make the flash shorter, but it would be worth it.
Cute and Funny.
Really cute and funny. Great little story you have there. Well done.
*DA*
funny!
Really good and so original! Nice work. :D:D:D:D
ahha
"stupid parrot, stupid penguin" was the funniest thing the animation was good and the sound was a little off but i dont mind that but i wana know is wuts up with the grass scene ?? didnt seem like it was needed
lol
that was funny