An average attempt.
First and foremost, the right click trick hasn't been prevented, allowing cheating by anyone who wants to get to the end without putting in the effort.
The music was a nice touch over most of the other maze games out there... but when a new loop starts at the beginning of each level and the old one doesn't stop, leaving you with a cocophany of 'music' all overlaying each other... sorry, not good.
"Follow the rules, dumbass"; Ok, what are they? the ONLY reason I knew not to push the button that leads to this screen is by pushing it to find out what it did.
Finally, your attitude; "If this passes it may be the first of many, if not then I will just not bother as it takes too much time..." I'm afraid this is the way to get people not to bother playing or voting as this sort of self deprecating attitude brings a lot of people down. If it gets through then, yes, by all means make more. If it doesn't get through then don't give up for crying out loud, learn a lesson, practice more and submit something better. You think we ended up with the better games of newgrounds by every creator quitting when something got blammed? No, they took in what people were saying about it and gave them what they want.
One more point that I just can't let drop... grammar and spelling, please. Capitals at the beginning of a sentence, full stops at the end, when you're using the word 'to' in an 'as well' sense it's 'too' with an extra 'o' and when you're referring to yourself it's 'I', not 'i'. Oh yeah, 'its' is when something owns something, 'it's' is short for 'it has'. I'm sorry to have to say this sort of thing but illiteracy is my biggest pet peeve.
