Rough round the edges
Let me just start by saying something about your preloader. It gives me motionsickness. You may think thats a joke, but it actually did. There is no need to have it whooshing past like that.
The Sound in this game is apppaling. The music is bearable but the sound effects are just annoying and repetetive. The dialogue is also dull and I just found myself skipping junks because I didn't have any incentive to read it.
Your spriting is clean and your animation is solid but there are just so many distractions its like some kind of bizzare psycological torture.