You rounded it off well.
I loved the intro and the T-shirt at the end had me chuckling away.
Also the ridiculously-breasted sailor moon chick made me smile, as did the entirety of the parody for that tip.
I was hoping for more visual gags - something the original had in abundance with your pastiches or as a visual metphor. This edition seemed to fall slightly short in that regard.
Still entertaining! Kudos.