Loved it
you're poetry is amazing dude :] keep em coming, id like to see more of ur poetry
Reviews for "The Burning Skies"
Jestercap13 responds:
will do, there should be some more coming in a while right know im kinda on a little break, lol
Good work as usual. ^.^
You are very good when it comes to poems, it's a great change of pace from the average jokes you find on Newgrounds. ^.^
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx most people dont like poetry much and yeah newgrounds sadly does get the same kinda of jokes over and over again. and when some one comes up with some thing new and original a few days later some one makes their own version of it or does the same thing with little differences, but oh well, mabey thats just how things work :\
Very good.
It is a very good poem, and great animation. I wasn't expecting his death in the end.
Jestercap13 responds:
lol, yeah you cant trust lightning........
Nice poem and great animation
Great job. This submission was diffrent and brought something new to the Flash Portal. I'm honestly not that interested in poetry and had low expectations for this flash but you've proved me wrong. The poem had excellent writing for a simple A,B rhyme scheme and it flowed nicely with the piano filled background music. The stylized subtitles were a nice addition to the already clearly spoken words. Now onto my favorite part of this flash, which would be the animation. I loved how you animated the lightning strikes throughout the submission and the character looked nice as well, with his long jacket flowing through the wind. All in all this is a great flash well deserving of a 9/10.
Jestercap13 responds:
wow, thanx man. most people dont think much of poetry and i my self am still learning A, B is so far and most likely will always be the easy one lol, glad you liked it.
Amazing!
Very good animation and poem! I really like the song of storms in there, it reminded me of ocarina of time. Im gonna play it now!
Jestercap13 responds:
lol, yeah that is a good game always fun to replay, song of storms and song of healing are my favorite songs from the LoZ series.