It works...
When you make a flash movie you have to ask yourself if you would even watch this if you would see something like this on newgrounds. It's boring has no humor, bad animated and drawn.
But I give it a 2/10 because it works. And remember you don't have to submit every little thing to newgrounds that you make.
But probably this will get blammed aswell.
I don't want to de-motivate you making flash animations thought. I think it's great that some ppl do this, but maybe first load it on www.spamtheweb.com and show it to your friends and let them tell you what they think before submitting to newgrounds.
Cheers :)
macco