Something that could have been great.
Im not going to be an ass about this. The fact is their are some truly fantastic things about these cartoons. This had some of the smoothest fbf ive seen in a flash of recent memory, and it had great use of things like camera angles, and pans which you rarely see in flash movies. Indeed the scope of these cartoons are far more then many series outside of Brackenwood. At the same time there are some niggling flaws i cant help but find in these cartoons. The pacing is often all over the place, which can get distracting at times. And there where also some volume issues in some scenes, in particular in the push up sequence, there was this incredibly smoothly animated shot of one of the characters doing the push ups but the wing furthest from the viewer was substantially larger then the wing closest which was a little disorientating. No doubt in time you guys will iron out those little crinkles tho, this episode was already a huge advancement over the last one.
On a side note, the english voices came accross as a little flat, and egoraptors voices werent dissimilar enough to his previous works. Nothing against ego, he just seems to be getting over exposed at the moment and you can pick his voice roles a mile away, which once again, can be distracting. Its nice to get some high calibur names attached to a project, but if all they are going to do is rehash old and used voices i dont see the point.
Anyway, sorry to sound so negative. All in all it was a great little toon, and i have no doubts this series will go from strength to strength.