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Reviews for "[FR] Void"

Soft and nice piece

Also a little mysterious,that's all what the void need to be...10/10, great work man!

Don't Untouch It!

Finish it! I like the sound of it.

Nice job

There's some really nice drum sounds in there, and the mix is clear and fat. I reckon you should continue it into some shapeshifter style drum n bass (listen to equinox or lifetime for inspiration).

Good shit mayyn.
BL

Good start - better ending needed

You've built this piece up nicely and put a lot of effort into it. The one issue I have is that this isn't carried on into the piece, more it just seems to peter out and fade away, as opposed to staying strong, when you need it to.

What I'd suggest is leaving the first movement alone and extending the piece to about 3-4 minutes. Build up to something bigger, don't just let it fall apart in your hands to the finish, as that would be a cruel waste of your talent.

Perhaps consider turning down the heavy bass beat that you get going in the middle of the track, just for a better balance and go from there, seeing how things go.

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Spaced

Well I get a feel of it showing someone waking up in a field of roses only for them to actually wake up and see everything around them in ruin as they pick themselves up and begin to walk forth. They wonder why the fighting tournament wound up like this as they pull out their sword. They look around and begin dashing forward and a quiet manner scouting the area. He notices a female who had entered slowly dying and has a small conversation with her trying to piece together what is going on.

He puts her on his back and moves forth so he can get her a resting area while he finishes up the tournament in her place. He wants things to return to normal but it appears that finishing the tournament is the only way for that to happen. He rushes forth as a light comes down and a ladder finds him. He rushes back to grab her then climbs the ladder as they figure out that they are being escorted to the area for the final round.

The ambient bell feel and synth give an atmosphere feel of just an empty void place that once looked great being torn apart from within by those who are blinded by greed in the tournament. The drums are calming and give a feel that you can keep on going and never have to give up either.

Overall, calming.

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