1:30 intro..
ha your intro pretty long and dry... not really feelin the progression but im kind of a cheese melody fan...this more ambeint than anything. this track could definitely use some cymbal action. crashes... id just make percusion tracks where you sit on one key and dont progreess to get a nice trance percusion section goin. this track could use some progression changes through out and maybe some synth changes....its awright better synth selection then some your other stuff iv listened too