Some tips
Very good for a 3rd try..
In the future,
-Add more options
-Work on the graphics a bit more
-Add some background music
-The main menu and the game were combined, try to keep them seperate...
Other than that, it was creative and funny, just needs a bit of retouching...
I'll be working on another flash similar to this and those are some good tips. I'll be having a lot of time on my hands until school starts up again.
HMMMMM...
A good animation! A short one but otherwise a good one. Just make another one, just a wee bit longer.
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That's really good for your third animation. And I'm sure you would have put more options if you had more time and experience.
~InnerChild548
holy crud
that was extremely short, it was great otherwise... oh crap its only your third? oh then great job, i have never made a flash but my bro has and it takes FOREVER
ok heres what i think
it ios just your third flash but maybe you should add more options, the grafs weren't great but as you said your still learning. my advice id keep it up dude. bad reviews are expected when anyone strats out so don't fret. i'll watch out for your next one. lets see if it can get more than 3 out of 10 from me next time. if it does then you know your on the right track