I liked it.
I like your style of Art. I laughed only once or twice, but this is definitely something I could watch a few times. I must say, Some of your stuff is over rated for the wrong reasons, and this is under rated for the wrong reasons. I didn't see any jokes that were ripped off so I don't know what others are talking about. But I think the Static in between each scene is what they might have been talking about? I do agree with the sound quality problem. Have you tried putting a Sock over the Microphone? It tends to help against Air static. If it doesn't, you should check the quality of the Mic.